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  • Your Novel in ONE Sentence—Anatomy of Story Part 5

    Good common sense advise

    Author Kristen Lamb's avatarKristen Lamb's Blog

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    I used to try to teach from the perspective of an editor, but I found that my thinking was flawed. Why? Because editors are like building inspectors. We have skills best used on a finished product. We are trained to look for problems. Is that a good skill? Sure. But do building inspectors design buildings? No. Architects do. Architects employ creativity and vision to create a final structure. Hopefully, they will have the necessary skills to create and design a structure that will meet code standards.

    Creativity and vision are not enough. Architects need to learn mathematics and physics. They need to understand that a picture window might be real pretty, but if they put that sucker in a load-bearing wall, they won’t pass inspection and that they even risk a fatal collapse.

    Aestheticism must align with pragmatism.

    This made me step back and learn to become an architect. When…

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  • Draft 3 – City of Zombies

    I updated my opening paragraphs for City of Zombies. It was boring and I couldn’t get a snail to read it… well, if snails read I couldn’t… enjoy.. this is 100% better

    kingsboro2008's avatarMonster Hunters – Hunters blog

    The sunlight burned.  Erik opened his eyes to see the sun staring back at him from his feet.  A scream to his right rattled him and another on his left.  Several feet rumbled past him as he got a hold of his bearings.  He sat upon the uneven wooden floor of a hay wagon.  His hands were tied behind his back but he slipped from them easily.  A large tractor moved slowly through the field in front of him toward a large gate.  A second tractor followed from the left side.  The driver of the second tractor struggled as a man attempted to unseat him. A finally blow sent the man backward and into the large rear tire.  The driver screamed at the men at the gate to open it.

    Erik watched as the gate opened and two rows of Blackadder troops stepped into hell on earth, which was the city of…

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  • Having a Grumpy day

    I’m in a terrible mood.  I have a good idea what it is but this is a writer’s blog and not a complainers blog.. so…

    Terence was a big man.  Monstrous in comparison to other 8 foot giants.  What am I kidding, Terence was unique and nothing else compared to the size and girth of the man.  Hell, he was barely a man anymore.

    In the Army he had his legs ripped from him.  Replacing them were steel posts shaped into muscular mechanisms.  These were not the thin blades or the leg cover ups that others got.  These were leg replacements provided by some secret mad scientist off the coast of Some-young island.  They were attached to nerves near the end of his stubs.  The legs were permanent but he could remove them easily but that’s not Terence’s only change.  A steel plate was attached to the right side of his face and an additional plate buried under a plot of hair right above it.  With all the robotics the clinic was unable to save his right arm.  It was void of muscle and dangled against his side.

    It was insane to be pissed off at an arm but Terence hated his arm.  The minuscule rod hung from his shoulder and it enraged him.  The fact that he had to look at it even set him off.  Terence did have a fully functional left arm.  It was the only original limb left on his body but it was only a memory of times before he didn’t want to recall.  A time when he was just human.

    Terence stepped from his apartment, ducking under the door frame and into the steel-plated world of Platonic.  Everything shimmered in the early morning light.  Everything but Terence.  Forever a grump Terence growled at the pleasantries of every day life.  “Get away from me,” he shouted as a familiar pattern tap..tapped up to him.

    “Hi Terence,”  said a small voice.  “I told you to leave me alone.”  Terence insisted.

    Terence passed several people and heard no reply.  He swallowed his anger and looked back.  A small girl walked behind him smiling and perky as ever.  Terence tried not to smile but it slid in behind his growl.  “Why?  Tell  me why?”

    “Cause I like you?”  The little girl said.  “That’s not a reason,” Terence replied.

    “Yes, it is.”

    Terence grumbled and continued walking.  “Where you going?”

    “I’m going to work,” Terence replied.  “I bet you get there really fast. Cause you have super legs.”

    “I guess.”

    “My friend has super legs.  Hi… my friend has super legs.”

    “What are you doing?”  Terence turns and looks as the little girl shares her glee with other city residents.  “I’m sorry,” the little girls says with a pout.  “Listen…”  Terence turns.  He kneels and still stares down at her.

    “I’m not a friendly Platonic resident.  I don’t like people.  I would rather be left alone.  Please go.”  The little girl smiled.  “Why are you smiling?”  Terence asked.

    “You didn’t say to don’t like me.  I think you like me.”  Terence wanted to grumble.  He wanted to scream but he couldn’t.  This little girl was a distraction and Terence appreciated the distraction.

    Terence stood and began to walk again.  “Don’t you have a family?”

  • Short Story Sunday: The Changeling

    Short Story Sunday: The Changeling

    Juliette Kings's avatarVampire Maman

    Goblins are known to steal sweet babies of Humans and replace them with Changelings.

    Lovely happy babies will suddenly seem to change. Well they have. Your baby has been replaced by a crying, unhappy, grouchy, nasty, Goblin Changeling.

    Sometimes the horrible Changelings are left to die on the doorsteps of churches or locked in attics. Usually the real babies are brought back. Fairies and others help out. More often or not ransoms are paid. A mother might pay with her beauty. A father might pay with his strength. It could be anything depending on the mood of the Goblins.

    In my case the Goblins took the baby and dropped me into the crib of someone who seemed oblivious to my nastiness.

    I spend my entire childhood treating my parents like crap and tormenting my little brother Trevor. My brother hated me but he should have loved me. Without me Trevor…

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  • The Trials of the Century

    I’m so stressed out.  I need to write some things off my chest.  I’m quickly realizing how much I am like my father.  Trying to teach my daughters to be respectful but getting a face full of disrespect because I’m old fashion.  At least that my guess.  Being a little respectful, is that old fashion.  Holding off on the swearing.  Refusing to use derogatory terms.  It’s like I am on the outside screaming “Come on.”  or even on the inside trapped in a world that wants to spread hatred and disrespect everywhere.

    I was going to go on but I hate doing this crap…. the belly aching.. On to a story…

    The Trials of the Century ———-

    Jim stepped forward hands shackled to a loop in the waist of his pants.

    “Mister Crow, do you understand the charges.”

    Jim Crow stood staunch and defiant.

    “I don’t have to speak to you.  I have the right to be silent.”

    “You also have the right to say whatever you want,” reminded the judge as he prepared for the stiff rebuttal.

    “Yes, I do,” stated Jim as he growled.

    “Mr. Crow, you have spent years festering within the community.  Your reign of terror spreading like a cancer.  Your actions separating the bipedal human community into haves and have-not.  I sentence you to Shut the Hell up!!”

    The judge then stood, grabbed the desk that sat in front of him and tossed it into the air.  It floated slowly over the head of the court appointed attorney and eventually landed within the empty seats of the juror.  The crash of the wood shook everyone within the court room but when the eyes returned to the judges desk it had reappeared.

    “Bailiff take this man away.”  A large man, dressed in black walked quickly toward Jim Crow.  His frame spread large against the smaller man and the lawyer.  The Bailiff grabbed Jim Crow and dragged him from the room.

    “Next up!”  The judge stood.  Towering over the room.  He then shrank as a man dressed in a sharp suit and tie stood in the center of the room.  Christian was shackled similarly to Jim Crow and stood shoulders straight and confident.

    “Do you understand the charges?”

    Christian looked upon the judge and said confidently.  “I only have one judge.  You hold no power over me.”

    The judge paused.  His lip grumbled slightly.  He then slapped a meaty hand upon the desk and said.  “I hold no power over you?  You are not in need of any judgement within this courtroom.  You have held my position for years.  Judge, juror and executioner.  You stand over the others in the world holding your arrogant point of view.  Judging others before your jaded views.  Your book tells you to judge none.  Treat others as you would like to be treated but you continue to hover over others.  A beacon of what is right to do.”

    Christian stood silent.  Lips sealed tightly.

    “Bailiff, remove this person.  I have nothing else to say to this man.”  The large man dressed in black stood and approached Christian.  He grabbed the man by the shoulder and lead him from the room.  “Next!”  Shouted the judge.

    Next to the enter the court was a tall man.  His head hidden and his arms shackled near the front of a large white robe.

    “What is the defendants name?”  Ordered the judge.  The words erupting from his powerful throat.  The Bailiff stood and spoke.  His voice measured.  “The defendant has declared no name, judge.”

    “Interesting,” the judge says as he studies the defendant.  He inspects the robe and the darkness under the hood.  “Have you declared no face and no existence?”

    The defendant shifts slightly then speaks clearly.  “I will be respected.  Even by you.”

    The judge turns his head slightly.  “You feel slighted by me?  You feel I’ve no respect for you?  I’ve never met you.  I don’t know who you are?  How can you declare I have a lack of respect?”

    The man stands quiet.

    “Do you understand the charges?”  Asks the judge.

    “I do not.”

    “Ah!” The judge sat back.  “Finally, an honest answer.  Bailiff bring the other into the court room.  Within moments all three men stood in front of the judge.  Jim Crow, Christian and ‘the man that would not be named’.

    “You will all be charged with arrogance, hate mongering, murder, rape and allowing the bipedal human race an opportunity to spread the insanity of your thoughts.  With this charge a sentence is returned.  You will be instructed to watch from above as your followers destroy what is left of the human race.  You will be forced to observe the failures and successes of each.”

    The small lawyer steps forward.  “Judge, this is unjust.  Can the defendants do anything to avoid this sentence?”

    The judge stands and the lawyer winces.  The judge walks from the desk and down to the floor of the courtroom.  “My friend,” he says to the lawyer.  “The world is full of wonderful people, religions and thoughts.  These defendants will not allow the freedom to view all that is wonderful in this world.  They are terrified that lack of judgement will make them irrelevant.  To treat everyone justly will force the hand of an imperfect human race to do what is unexpected and figure out how to do things right.  These defendants do not have the confidence to allow the voice within us all to do what’s right.  This, my friend, is why they cannot avoid this sentence.”

    The judge then turned and stepped back up to the desk.  “Bailiff take them away to watch their own handy work.  Let me know if it all works out.”

  • Chapter 7: At the Borders of Nightmare

    Chapter 7: At the Borders of Nightmare

    towerofteeth's avatarThe Family Man

    The Deadworld is a prison. However, people tend to misunderstand those moments when it seems to defy its most defining, vile features. Forests, by way of example, are often romanticized for their beauty; but they are merely cracked windows into those dreams from which we have been stolen, and exist as nothing more than fleeting reminders—symbols—for our freedoms lost beyond all of this dying flesh. Granted, a dark forest is one of the thinner barriers separating us from whence we came (and thus why some confuse it for the thing it imprisons), but a barrier none-the-less. Obviously the same can be said for basements filled with the moldering dead, attics containing chests stuffed with burned toys and faded photographs, forgotten graveyards steeping in twilight, mysterious holes burrowed impossibly deep into the earth, haunted houses made from Palewood trees, and all of the places where the night endures beyond the day…

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  • Fear and Prejudice

    kingsboro2008's avatarMonster Hunters – Hunters blog

    An old rusty truck bounced hard, falling within a saucer shaped pothole.   Erik lay prone next to the spider woman.  He was thrown into the air and fell upon the bed of the truck hard.  “Damn it!”  He swore as he held his head.  That was before he realized the large abdomen of the spider woman lay next to him strapped to the bed of the truck.  “What the hell?”  He shouted but Ambrosia and Brittany heard nothing.  Ambrosia drove the truck.  The Calico fur ,upon her face, blowing from the wind of an open window.  Brittany, a tall half human/half goat satyr sat in the passenger seat.  Erik banged on the glass separating the cab of the truck from the back of the truck.  Brittany turned and smiled as Erik fell upon his back after the truck hit another pot hole.

    Ambrosia slowed the truck and pulled into a…

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  • Short Story Sunday: Glass Dreams

    Short Story Sunday: Glass Dreams

    Juliette Kings's avatarVampire Maman

    Dreams: An Austin and Elizabeth Story (Part 15)

    “I had one of those real dreams last night. You know those dreams where it seems real. I mean really real, like you’re there and you know the people. Dreams that make you feel like it is happening to you RIGHT NOW.”

    The dream involved a zombie apocalypse, an air ship sort of air plane, a roughly handsome zombie general who was addicted to prescription pain killers and carried a guitar with him, and a zombie queen. It wasn’t his usual type of dreams. Austin explained his Little Nemo in Hell story as Elizabeth listened.

    “They weren’t really zombies in the classic sense, but they had been changed into something else. Like followers in bodies and minds that were connected. Don’t think I’m crazy. It was so real.”

    “You’re talking to a Vampire,” she said with just the slightest smile. He thought he could see…

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  • The Tale of the Whale Who Got Away…

    akrummenacker's avatarMusings Of Two Creative Minds

    …Or making hard choices while revising your novel

    Whenever I write a novel, or short story, so many ideas come to me that I immediately write down as I’m going on along.  I have so much fun with my characters I sometimes wonder if I’m getting enough interesting scenes into the story.  I start to worry that I’m having too much of a good time listening to my characters bantering back and forth to make them feel more real and alive, that I start to wonder whether or not there’s enough action going on in the book.  When that happens I start coming up with more  scenes that help get the readers’ pulses pounding.

    But then when I go back to start the second draft I look back over the entire story and find that word count is much higher than I originally planned.  I try to aim no higher…

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